Could use some honest feedback on a new track
Hey. Been listening and tweeking this song to death and could use a fresh opinion on it. All my friends are too nice to tell me anything productive about it. Anyone wanna give it a listen and Drop an honest comment or two. Thanks
Tags: ears, feedback, fresh, honest, new, song
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bangkok rooftop.mp3, 3.9 MB
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Permalink Reply by Steven Charles on -
Good work. I think you've got a good payoff about a minute in when you get into the essence of the track, most of your challenge would be before that. If it were mine, I'd work on the piano part just before that, maybe add a little to the part and tweak the tone/add more character to build listener interest in that section, then I might revisit the half-open hi-hat sound at the beginning, if you listen to the track once it gets into the main theme and then rewind back to the beginning that open hat sound seems loud and a little out of place. Just 2 cents, sounds like you're on your way to a good track.
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